I like this, reminds me of a 60's style art or add, like Johnny walker or something, it's cool. Also, the other one is reversed, did you forget to flip one of the versions to the other side? (I ask because the light also seems to come from the opposite direction.
I like them both. This is quite striking and a well balanced square with lots of movement. I would be interested to see the lf version flipped horizontally to match this. I think it would read very differently that way. And I like the mystery of the out of focus highlight in the corner of the other version. Tough choice!