In old factory of tractors

In old factory of tractors

Location
Ursus, Poland
Equipment Used
Yashica Mat-124G
Exposure
f4/2sec
Film & Developer
Ilford hp5 plus, ilfosol s
I like this image, it leaves me wanting to know what is at the end of the hall. The use of dof - sharp to start with and then hazy at the end adds a dream like quality to the image. Also, like the low vantage point you choose for the image.

Only thing I do not care for is the bright light source at the top of the image..I would either crop it out or dodge it..as it seems like a white blob. This is just my vision of the image and your may be different. Over all I still like it.
 
Eliminating the bright spot at the ceiling changes the picture dramatically. To me it works with or without the hot spot, but with a completely different result.
 
Thank you for comments. I agree that bright point is controversial, but I like it, just he turned my attention how I was there :smile:
 

Media information

Category
Critique Gallery
Added by
szelas
Date added
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Comment count
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Image metadata

Filename
2570123-med.jpg
File size
192.9 KB
Dimensions
533px x 649px

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