I like this shot a lot, but the harsh shadows on the foreground rocks distracted me a bit. I am wondering what fill flash would do to the foreground. But were you even carrying flash with your 4x5?
Yes the shadows are a bit too strong in the foreground and hindsight indicates that I ought to have given more exposure.
the other sheet I exposed was an intentional double exposure. However the tripod moved in the wet sand between tripping the shutter and so it is only fit for the bin!