Ice River

An observation of the ever so slow relinquishing of winter's hold on the water. Comments appreciated
Location
Near Holland, Michigan
Equipment Used
Hasselblad 501 CM
Exposure
f/16@ 1/8
Film & Developer
FP4 in DiXactol
Paper & Developer
MGIV in Ilford PQ, Selenium toned
Lens Filter
none
Lovely. Could truly be an aerial or a macro, either way it is full of interesting abstract curves. The contrast is very nice, giving good edge definition.

Looks like there might be a wee bit of falloff along the right edge that find slightly distracting from the other figures.

Sweet stuff! Would be very nice in a large print.
 
Dan, it looks a bit light in a thin line down the right, that's what I meant to say. In other words, I think you might burn in the print a bit more. Now that you mention burning, it appears to me that the burned area makes the lighter area more prominent. It's not a big issue though, this is probably an OCD comment.

Nice work.
 

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