Ice River
Dan Henderson

Ice River

An observation of the ever so slow relinquishing of winter's hold on the water. Comments appreciated
Location
Near Holland, Michigan
Equipment Used
Hasselblad 501 CM
Exposure
f/16@ 1/8
Film & Developer
FP4 in DiXactol
Paper & Developer
MGIV in Ilford PQ, Selenium toned
Lens Filter
none
Lovely. Could truly be an aerial or a macro, either way it is full of interesting abstract curves. The contrast is very nice, giving good edge definition.

Looks like there might be a wee bit of falloff along the right edge that find slightly distracting from the other figures.

Sweet stuff! Would be very nice in a large print.
 
Dan, it looks a bit light in a thin line down the right, that's what I meant to say. In other words, I think you might burn in the print a bit more. Now that you mention burning, it appears to me that the burned area makes the lighter area more prominent. It's not a big issue though, this is probably an OCD comment.

Nice work.
 

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