Vahid, I am with JohnArs on this one. To me, a tight crop on the face is a stronger image. Something just dosen't "feel" right when viewing it. Since my emotions are mixed up on this image I'll shut up! Charlie........
Armin and charlie, thanks for the comments. I was not sure about this photo either. A test of tight crop on the face in PS (excuse my language like Charlie said, makes the photo much more interesting. It has to wait until I get around to do it the right way.
Like the face crop as well but the right arm of model looks weird due to either the shadow or the cloak. I do like the somewhat reflective surface under the model. I think this concept could work with a few changes. The idea seems good.