Gulfoss

Gulfoss

I'm submitting a portfolio of printed images for my degree on Friday and have been told to seek a critique of them. Short notice I know. Seems like this is the best place to do it! Any thoughts would be very much appreciated.
Equipment Used
Mamiya C330S, 135mm lens
Film & Developer
FP4 in PMK Pyro
Paper & Developer
Foma Variant 123 in Ilford Multigrade (Sepia toned for now, will later selenium tone)
I like the image overall, and its very balanced composition wise. I like the color, and the detail is all there. I think the selenium toning will make the blacks pop and will warm the image even more with your bleach/sepia treatment... Unless it's the scan, it does look just a little flat on my screen ?? I do know Variant took me a few tries from a scanning perspective as it does scan differently to glossy paper.
 
I agree with Andrew ... the toning I believe will finish the print nicely ...
 

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