Grant Park Shoreline

Nice. Really like the composition!

Your sky looks very black as if you burnt it in and I feel that you have far too much foreground which is lacking in interesting detail. So I would say that you could crop off 1/3 rd of the foreground and a little less exposure when printing.

TEX

TEX said:

Your sky looks very black as if you burnt it in and I feel that you have far too much foreground which is lacking in interesting detail. So I would say that you could crop off 1/3 rd of the foreground and a little less exposure when printing.

TEX

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Thanks, Tex. I wasn't sure about this one. I burned in the sky because it was so blah, but as I look at the print I see your point. I wanted the sky more dramatic, but it is too dark. I like your cropping suggestion. I reprinted another photo you critiqued and the new crop looks much better. Thanks for taking the time to reply.