Gate
Paul Sorensen

Gate

This is the first 4X5 that I am happy with. I wasn't paying enough attention and put the thunderstorm that was happening behind the right hand standard of the gate, but I like the sky and there are no spots!
Location
5 miles north of Watkins, CO
Equipment Used
4X5 Cambo, 90mm f/8 Super Angulon
Exposure
Not Recorded
Film & Developer
J&C Classic Pan 400, D76
Paper & Developer
Agfa RC, Dektol
Lens Filter
Red 25
I agree that the gate is distracting and feel that it does not appear easily recognisable as a barrier.

The sky is a good'un....perhaps you could have used the road/pylon line trailing off into the distance to draw the eye twds infinity and therefore the thuderstorm? Removal of the gate and not having the area of shadow on the right might have allowed you to print some more drama into the sky...perhaps using the horizontal format to keep the sky proportioantely more dominant.

Just thoughts!

Hope you are enjoying the 5x4!
 

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