Garibaldi, Ore. No. 2

I like the tight composition of this closer perspective, but it feels less emotional than version 1, tho I can’t explain why – I’d be interested in what any of you viewers thought
Location
Northern Oregon Coast
Equipment Used
5x7 deardorf, nikkor 240 lens
Film & Developer
tri-x and d76
Paper & Developer
cranes and pot. ox.
The feeling I get with this version, is one of safety, or familiarity, i.e. in the middle of somewhere, with lots going on. Whereas, with version 1, there is a feeling of isolation, which draws me more to that one emotionally.
 
I would also vote for this one. In my opinion, your composition brings the viewer right into the activity, and also provides a great sense of what it's like to be there. The other image, however seems to be too far away, if that is the best way to put it.

Good luck with the show.
George
 
I too liker this one better. The compostion is better and THE perspective PULLS ME INTO THE PHOTO.
 

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