I dunno Bruce, there's enough of the performer to see what's going on. I like the highlight on the arm and face (It looks like he was wearing clown face paint to me). I agree the flame is superbly caught.
I think the exposure is great - maybe half a stop more - or a bit of a dodge - but the outline of the performer works very well for me. The fire is brilliantly captured. Give the OM4 meter my regards
i think its perfect as is....i see enough of the performer to satisfy me and to know what is happening...and the light on his forearm is wonderful...the flame? amazing....great shot!
~~marianne