Etretat

Nice scene! I'd suggest cropping to horizon line. The middle ground cliffs need burning in to get some more detail. Might also try a higher contrast grade paper (#3 or 4).

I don't think you need to change a thing with this one. very well composed, tonal values are spot on, with the possible exception of that one bright spot on the cliffs about 1/4 of the way across and 1/4 up the image from the right. If you MUST crop, crop half the sky.

I really like this. Reminds me of where I grew up.
Ian

there could be little things that may be changed but that would be personal tid-bits. overall very nice. I like how the strata continues across to the island.

mike andersen

Looks fine as it is

Hello everyone. Thanx for all your Nice reply's and thoughts about my questions. After thinking the a lot about the critiques here is my plan. I'm going to try to print is as straight as possible with some crop in the sky. thanx The flyingcamera and Doughowk.
Then I'm going to try do give a little more impact to the rockface . And to finish it I want to make the shadow detail from the pinnacle on the water a little bit more visible. Will show the real work (print) here on apug just give me some time.

Thanks again for al your valuable and nice replys

Good night.
ijsbeer

To experiment a little, try to bring out the striations in the cliffs by burning at max contrast and then bleaching back if need be.