Eliot K, Reclining, Potomac River Shore

Location
Potomac River, Maryland side
Equipment Used
Contax RTS III, 50mm Planar f1.4
Exposure
unrecorded
Film & Developer
Efke IR820c Aura, Pyrocat HD
Lens Filter
Hoya RM72
If you were to crop out the bottom strip where we see the water, we would not know how high up he is from the water, that unknown might add something. I rarely crop my work so take my comment w a grain of salt as I struggle to crop sometimes...
 
zsas said:
If you were to crop out the bottom strip where we see the water, we would not know how high up he is from the water, that unknown might add something. I rarely crop my work so take my comment w a grain of salt as I struggle to crop sometimes...
Since you bring the crop up and since the artist asks for suggestions , I agree with you and I would go a step more and crop the sky in the top left ...just my 2c i think it would bring the viewer back to the subgect , in this case it's beautiful light
 

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