Shop dummies in the Corn Exchange, an artsy/crafty shopping mall in a converted Victorian building in Leeds.
This is the second roll of HP5 that I've put through a newly-acquired Hasselblad 500CM with a 80mm Zeiss Planar. 50% who've seen this love it, the other half hate it. I can't decide...
I think it's well seen. However, I would suggest burning down the out of focus background more, to keep the eye on the "dummies". The pentagonal highlights (aperture shaped?) are especially noticeable.
Something bothers me about this. It seems to be the area around the left dummy's shoulder. May be it needs burning in near the top, or a crop somewhere.
Otherwise I like the reality of it, if that is not too strange a comment.