Almost a HCB shot ... But helas, not quite. Great eye and idea, but some disturbing things here.
- crop away the half letter before 'DIE ..'
- is somebody passing behin the man ?. It attract attention but does not add to the picture.
- the man has already 5% died since his feet are disappearing.
I quite like that you have left the crop as is - it suggests that you have seen more than is immediately obvious - and as for the man\'s missing feet - not that much of a problem when it is what is in his mouth that makes the picture.