Die Young
geraldatwork

Die Young

Saw this fellow during one of my street shooting episodes.
Location
New York, NY
Equipment Used
Leica M2 Canon 35/2
Film & Developer
Delta-400 D-76 1+1
Paper & Developer
Ilfird MG IV Fiber, Dektol
Almost a HCB shot ... But helas, not quite. Great eye and idea, but some disturbing things here.
- crop away the half letter before 'DIE ..'
- is somebody passing behin the man ?. It attract attention but does not add to the picture.
- the man has already 5% died since his feet are disappearing.
 
I quite like that you have left the crop as is - it suggests that you have seen more than is immediately obvious - and as for the man\'s missing feet - not that much of a problem when it is what is in his mouth that makes the picture.
 

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