Detail of an Abandoned House

• Vincent Brady

• Jun 28, 2011

While well exposed, it is difficult to find any object in your picture to focus on. It's a matter of working on your compositional approach to your pictures.

 

• Joe O'Brien

• Jun 28, 2011

Thank you for the critique

 

• puptent

• Jun 29, 2011

It's an old television, isn't it? As a still life, or macro-scape it works for me. But I thought the title and the image a bit disconected.

 

• Joe O'Brien

• Jun 30, 2011

Yes, I suppose I should have titled it when I was a bit more coherent, I meant for the title to be "Detail of an Old Television in an Abandoned House".