Hey, this is pretty awesome ! I did the same text with my students last year; I think nobody came up with bodytext ! Mostly charcoal, pencil or deluted ink. I will use this example image next year
Since you live in (city that I can see because I'm a subscriber not sure if others can so I won't mention it) have you shot with Cam? She lives there so that's why I asked, skinny super tall (like 6 foot 1) girl with tattoos umm edgy perhaps but seemingly sweet. Have you?