The subject matter is well captured with the pinhole camera which adds a lot to the picture. The toning affect is quite excellent. But the combination of the toning and the action shot in my opinion don't work together. I feel the action would be just as well rendered in a straight B&W print. The toning I feel would best suit a landscape or still life shot.
Of course this is just one man's opinion.
Thanks to all for the kind comments. So much feedback only after a few hours. Wow.
@TEX: The print is not toned. The color comes from the lith developer. I do not have a straight print. All I have done besides the lith development is a scan of the negative which does not please me. But when I am in the darkroom next time, I will give a straight print a try and show it to you.