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Escambia County Hunting Camp
Wmcgowin

Escambia County Hunting Camp

A recent photo of an abandoned caretaker's cabin at a hunting camp.

(This is my first attempt, so bear with me)
Location
Escambia County, Alabama
Equipment Used
Canon A-1
Exposure
.125 sec at f 3.5
Film & Developer
Ilford Delta 100 D-76
Paper & Developer
Ilford Multigrade IV Pearl finish Dektol
Lens Filter
none
Leigh-

I made it out of focus deliberately, except for the mailbox. But I guess maybe I should have used a deeper range of focus. Thanks for the input.
 
No, not necessarily more DOF. I really love that aspect of your photo, along with the wonky lines of the cabin vs. the vertical mailbox. And I like how the highlights are apearing on my monitor but I suspect that you'd want to have a little bit of tone in them on the print. My eye is searching a bit for a focal point and I know its the mailbox because of the DOF but the tones in its door and its post are too similar to the wall and I'm being distracted a little by the round object on the left. Perhaps of you upped the contrast a bit to bring more darks into the points of interest... There's a lot of potential here.
Best regards,
James
 

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