Monroe

Monroe

I cannot seem to find constrictive criticism from anywhere or anyone, so I'm hoping someone on APUG will have something to say. Please be impossibly picky.
Location
Downtown Chicago
Equipment Used
RB67, 127mm K/L
Film & Developer
Kodak T-Max 100 / D-76
Paper & Developer
Ilford Multigrade RC 5x7 / Dektol
Good use of pos/neg space, interesting shot considering the likely dimensions of the scene/subject. I like the dark feel. Never been to Chicago...
 
Been to Chicago many times. There are a lot nicer scenes or ones with more impact. This scene could be taken in any city. That is my criticism FWIW.

PE
 
it is an interesting architectural/built environmental abstraction,
BUT the building is leaning backwards. while it looks OK
you could print it so the building is perpendicular to the top/bottom edge
by tilting the easel and stopping down your enlarger lens all the way ..
or if you have an enlarger with a bellows and allows for lens plane movements
you could fix it that way and stop down.

john
 
I find the print too dark. A little less contrast, and shorter exposure will yield a more interesting image.
Morry Katz
 

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