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This is an image taken at Bodega Head in Sonoma County. I just printed it last night but want to solicit feedback because the thread of sky bothers me a bit and I don't know why.
Location
Bodega Head
Equipment Used
Eastman Improved #2 5X7
Exposure
Unrecorded
Film & Developer
Efke 100 in Pyrocat HD
Paper & Developer
Azo #2 in Amidol
Lens Filter
None
Yeah lose the sky. I really is not adding anything interesting to the image.
 
The sky seems to be just enough to make the border ambiguous, and make the land look like it's cut off on the right half of the upper edge. Losing the sky would solve that issue, but I'm not sure if it might create another problem.
 
Thanks Mark and David. David, after looking I think you're right that cropping the sky creates a problem because of the crop would infringe on portions of the rock formation. Maybe I'll try and print down the sky a bit more.

Cheers, James
 

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Critique Gallery
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James Bleifus
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Filename
2428scan20050329_083058.jpg
File size
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Date taken
Tue, 29 March 2005 8:41 AM
Dimensions
474px x 309px

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