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After several weeks of nearly constant rain, finally had few hours where I was able to get out for a while.

This is Awa Island located about 12 miles west of Honshu in the Sea of Japan.

I am honestly not sure which one of these pictures work the best, or if either one of them works at all. These are still works in progress so I would love to hear any comments, pro or con.

Thanks for looking.

Gary
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Location
Sea of Japan, Niigata, Japan
Equipment Used
Hasselblad 501CM & 250mm
Exposure
20s at f/22
Film & Developer
Fuji Acros in Pyrocat HD
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGIV in Dektol
Lens Filter
10 Stop ND and No.22 Orange
Vincent Brady
Gary,
This is the version that appeals to me most. I consider this as a cloudscape which works really well, but I feel that you have more sea than is needed in the shot. I would be inclined to crop out some of the sea, just above that black slick near the bottom. In doing that I find that the island becomes more prominent and the clouds assume a greater impact.
This is just one persons opinion, hope you receive more.

Cheers
Vincent
 

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