Slippery When Wet
Andy K

Slippery When Wet

Early morning ride.
Location
Shoeburyness, England
Equipment Used
Nikon F80
Exposure
Not noted
Film & Developer
Kodak VR400 lab processed
Paper & Developer
Lab print
I like it very much, the composition is very geometrical, very well balanced, but IMHO, the boat at the left is too close to the left pole of the sign, a little bit of space there could make a better image. This is the only frame you did of this image?
 
I like it too, and believe it or not, had exactly the same problem with the boat on the left "touching" the pole (before reading Jose's comment). One step to your left may have fixed this.
 
I bought Kodak VR on the strength of your earlier pictures Andy. I now have several rolls to develop. Seeing your three latest pics , I look forward to my negs. Nothing I've seen has led me to believe I will be disappointed. This one looks muted and slightly washed out which is exactly as early mornings look - at least they do on most occasions at our latitudes in the U.K.

pentaxuser
 
I feel that the compositional elements come together very well here to give a good picture.

cheers
TEX
PS I also think that it would be great in B&W.
 

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