grandmom

Could be the effect of her glasses but ideally I'm of the school where they eyes need to be the sharpest part of a portrait. The background looks good to me as it's well out of focus. Unless there's a tad more contrast in the print I'd burn the left side in a little more as the light is coming from the right to give it more depth. I hope you accept my comments as positive feedback which is how they are intended.

The whole image might be printed down a little bit, especially for scanner presentation. On my monitor her forehead is almost paper white. I would shoot for Z VI.5. Also there is a lot of whiteness surrounding her head, which is distracting. This can be burned in a little to focus on granny.