Heart Beat; A, Oman 2008

Heart Beat; A, Oman 2008

Knew the hilight was there on the hands, forgot how crap 55 is at dynamic range :-(( Does it still work for you?
Location
Muscat, oman
Equipment Used
Toyo 45CF
Exposure
1/15s f5.6
Film & Developer
Polaroid 55 P/N
Paper & Developer
Negative Scan
The face and eyes are powerful but the hi lights on the arms, hands and even his watch keep dragging the viewers eyes down to them. Try burning the hi lights down and see what you think.

Cheers

TEX
 
Thanks Vincent, they definitely are distracting...At the time of taking the images it seemed right...but photography is always amazing, becasue what you get is sometimes simply not what you saw...thanks. K
 

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