Algodones Dunes, California  2004
Richard Boutwell

Algodones Dunes, California 2004

An 8x10 contact print.

A contrast to where I am now. I think only the subject matter has changed.
Location
Imperial County, CA
Film & Developer
efke 100/ABC pyro
Paper & Developer
Azo F3/MAS amidol
Lens Filter
K2
I find this oppressively lugubrious. My first instinct is to say "Lighten up already", but perhaps a mournful response is your intent.
 
Personally a bit dark and contrasty for me, but I'm sure perfect for other! Reminds me on a lunar scape with those spacey blacks...cant spot the rover tho....

Great layering, forcing he eye to have good wals about. Howzabout posting a G2 Azo print for comparison?
Tom
 
Sorry, but this qualifies as "over the top." I've spent many dawns on dunes praying for 4 stops of contrast. When I see 10 stops, it's disorienting. Ansel Adams called this the charcoal and chalk syndrome.
I want to love this image, as it has all the elements of a great one. I think it would be wonderful with 30 shades of gray, not 2.
 
I'd be willing to bet the print shows much better tonality than the scan with respect to shadow and highlight detail. With this amount of contrast, the foreground itself would make an interesting abstract. It almost looks like ripples of foam at the beach.
 
I am afraid I agree with Tom stanworth, but mr Deckeld Edge is should live in the present and stop quoting Ansel.
 
I think that when someone is expressing an opinion in the critque gallery they should quote anyone they want.
 
In principal I agree with you Claire, but I am just very tired of people using Ansel to point fingers and tel you how things should be done.
 

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