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geraldatwork

On The Move

This was difficult for me to print for there was a large difference between the darker area where the man was and the much brighter area on the right. That triangle in the right corner took a lot of burning in. I wish it were not there but I didn't want to crop it out because I wanted the man to appear to be leaving the frame on the lower left.
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Location
New York City, NY
Equipment Used
Leica M2, Canon 35/2
Film & Developer
Tri-X, D-76
Paper & Developer
Ilford Multigrade IV Fiber
Sadly an all too common sight but well captured. I agree about the bottom right hand corner but it's not too distracting for me as the figure provides a strong focus. Also the lighter triangle fits in with the light near the cars so has a natural feel.
 

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