First Snow
Derek Lofgreen

First Snow

This was a shot that I took last Ocotober at Winter Park. The snow storm was just getting started and visiblity kept getting less and less as time went on. One of those peacefull snows when all you can hear is the snow falling.
Location
Winter Park area CO
Equipment Used
Yashica 12
Exposure
1sec @ f22
Film & Developer
Illford Delta 100, D76
Paper & Developer
Oriental Warm Tone Fiber, Dektol
The placement of gray values between the background spruces and foreground spruces is just right. However, this looks more like something one would do for a cover magazine because of all that vacant white space above the trees. It is a great place to stuff text, but has nothing to add to the composition of a fine art print. Do not ever do that again.

Sorry Derek about being so harsh. I may be posting some of my work shortly and you will have a chance to get even.
 
I agree. It appears to be something to which I would add something. This is a fine experiment in photographing a winter scene to see if you can keep the detail in the shadows...(but you're too dark for that). I'd say tighten up and lighten up. AND KEEP SHOOTING.
 

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