Marleen
Nienke
Whole Foods Market, Reflected
Dupont Circle, Night, looking North up Connecticut Avenue
Marleen
Americana
Preparing for the ceremony
Full Service--"scan" test

Marleen

1st of a portrait shoot done today. Wil print Soon but for now only a scan. What do you think of the composition? It is a crop from the negative.
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Location
The park
Equipment Used
Mamiya RZ + 90mm
Exposure
some
Film & Developer
FP4+ X tol
Paper & Developer
neg scan
David A. Goldfarb
I like the composition and selective focus, but I'd print it with more contrast than you have here.

Lately I'm finding that soft works best when it's in tension with hard, so a soft lens with hard light or short DOF as in this image with more contrast.
 
tony lockerbie
Like the crop and selective focus but agree with David about more contrast. Also would look better I feel, if her face were lightened and the background was darkened a little..... pull you into the eyes a little more.
Tony
 

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