Anna (coffee shop employee series)

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  Thomas Bertilsson

• Jul 10, 2007

Matt, this series is really nice!
- Thomas

 

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  michael9793

• Jul 10, 2007

I like this a bunch, but just for me IF the picture ended just below her breasts where the arm bends I think it may work better. I tend to feel the arm is distorted by the way the light falls on it. again just my thoughts on the pic.


mike a

 

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  blaze-on

• Jul 10, 2007

Thanks Thomas..
Michael, I like the flow of that arm and where it leads back to center. I did try it cropped more, but preferred this. At least I find it leading "up" vs. "down"..(and I'm often wrong!)
Thanks for the comments!

 

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  wfe

• Jul 10, 2007

Hey Matt,
I like this a lot but I'm finding her a bit disengaged which could simply be my obsession with eye contact. In any event this is great and the series is wonderful.

Cheers,
Bill

 

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  blaze-on

• Jul 10, 2007

I hear ya Bill, but with her being somewhat on the shy side, I thought a moment like this to be more intimate..like watching someone at sleep..a private moment so to speak. Thanks for looking..

 

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  Jersey Vic

• Jul 10, 2007

This is wonderful. Great model, pose, image, execution.
100% on the money for me.