If Silence Can Speak

If Silence Can Speak

This photo is from the recent Minnesota huge snowstorm. Please critique and comment
Location
Minneapolis Minnesota
Equipment Used
Nikon N2020 50mm 1.4
Film & Developer
Velvia scanned
Lens Filter
No filter
Very nice. I've been looking at a lot of Stieglitz & Steichen lately, and your picture evokes those days.
 
The silence in this photograph is speaking loud and clear. A strikingly beautiful image.

Cheers,
Bill
 
Thank you very much for such a high complements.
hkr: Thank you for mentioning those two giants for the comment. I don't even dare to touch their works. I actually still consider most of the people here as mentors, since I'm only a beginner(started seriously in 2004) and still somewhat young(26). I'm still trying to get my basics(composition and exposure) down, so I haven't tried processing my own film or anything alternative.
I'll continue to learn for you all,
Didi
 
I love this image, Didi. I'm from Minnesota myself and miss the snow sometimes. :smile: Take this critique for what it's worth because I'm much newer to photography than you are but for me, the lamppost is a bit of a distraction. I tried "cropping" it out with my hand and my eye was drawn then to the tree and snow-covered bench instead of the light. Just a thought. :smile:
 
Another perspective to what jolynned suggests might have beem to step back a few steps to include the lamppost more towards the 1/3 point of the frame and also include the branches of the trees. I also wish the lamppost were straight. But this is still a lovely and evocative picture. thanks
 
Thank you very much for the input. I actually tried to crop the lamp post but it feels just a little "unbalance" for some reason. You're both right though, that the lamppost doesn't look too pleasing the way it is even though as a whole the image is good. It might be because it's not straight(maybe because I'm shooting from a downhill slope) and/or the tree too close to the edge.
Thank you for very constructive feedback.
 

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