Leaning Shack

This is really nice, I do think a bit more conservative toning would really make it as this has enormous potential. Have you tried bleaching for only 5 to 30 seconds (depends on bleach strength), wash til yellow clears, then KRST bath? should get much a milder browning. One other thought is to 'flash' the paper for .2 ( 2 tenths) or .3 sec's. After you've made the image expsoure and burn / dodge steps, pull the neg carrier out to flash the paper with pure light at the same f-stop, should help smooth those bright sky highlights with some 'toneable' density. Just some thoughts.. hope you don't mind the ideas.

Thank you Victor. These are both realy good thoughts to try out. This is exactly why I posted this one in the critique gallery.

Flashing worked very well by the way