Sonatas X-6 (Gioventu - Presto) Pieces of the Present Abide - The Life of the River

Sonatas X-6 (Gioventu - Presto)​

Arriving at man’s pretty nature preserve,
The railroad and I together have traveled from Allenton
Mirrors in our journey, disparate in our methods
Both tracing the syntagms of our lives in the landscape.

after decoding (?) "syntagms", the words and image became more meaningful and i appreciated them both!

Thanks. Sorry about the jargon, but the terms are useful for the messages I am trying to transmit.

PS. There really is a train passing in the upper right - very hard to see!

Brendan Quirk said:

Thanks. Sorry about the jargon, but the terms are useful for the messages I am trying to transmit.

PS. There really is a train passing in the upper right - very hard to see!

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no apologies are necessary.... i see your poems as integral to the image....

using minor white's formula for viewing "take 30 minutes to really see an image" , thus 30 minutes on the image, and my usual 30 minutes of poetry understanding!

i did have to decode the word, once i did it was like the final piece of the puzzle - perfect!

Thanks.