Tales of Sails

Good effort.
You might consider lighting this pose from the other (left) side. As is, i think it is his hand that is most lit and becomes more of the subject. A slightly darker, less lit hand would put more interest one his face.
A little more rim back light wouldn't hurt. Or a slightly lighter background tone or even a gradated one would help cause its all seems a little too dark and/or muddy back there.
As i said, good effort though IMHO
Robert

@rknewcomb Thanks Robert appreciate the feedback. Yes I need to increase the back light, the print is a little better defined, but still needs a bit more. I will find a better solution for a back drop. Hands a problem, was looking for a fireplace look, had a nice warm uv tanning lamp lighting the face. Thought slightly out of focus would tone it down a little. Food for thought, thanks again.