Rice processing factory pt.II

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  Hatchetman

• Nov 15, 2018

Very nice!

 

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  David Lyga

• Nov 15, 2018

In some ways (not all) this is as good an image as I would be permitted to imagine. There is a bit of a painterly quality, combined with utter resolution, giving new impetus to those who call photography art. The only omission is the lack of a central subject, but, tonally and composition-wise, it is good. - David Lyga

 

• grahamp

• Nov 15, 2018

Always interesting to see how the aesthetics of a building reflect their purpose. The grain elevators in the American mod-West are a case in point.

I'd reduce the sky and emphasize the paddy myself. The (watch?) dog is a nice touch.

 

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  JohnArs

• Nov 15, 2018

I like it very much it is a keeper!!

 

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  nick_clark

• Nov 15, 2018

@David Lyga @grahamp thanks for the feedback! I agree with both of you, needs a central focus and I should have placed more emphasis on the paddy than the sky

 

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  awty

• Nov 16, 2018

I think it all works, the dog, chimney and box of paddies form a nice triangle central focus against the diagonal lines. Its simplicity in perfection. Great stuff.

 

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  jtk

• Nov 19, 2018

Concern with "central focus" seems odd. I think the overall first hit, followed by subsequent discoveries, are almost always important enough to abandon formalities like that. I enjoy that first hit as well as subsequent discoveries....for example, the spikey rice stems contrast interestingly with the rectangular bulk of the building and of course the clouds.

 

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  nick_clark

• Nov 20, 2018

@jtk thanks for the feedback!