Olive tree

Olive tree

Location
Island in lake Trasimeno Italy
Equipment Used
Pentax 67II
Film & Developer
FP4+ & Pyrogallol
Paper & Developer
Foma FB & Ansco
Lens Filter
Yellow
Fantastic - the negative space makes it look like a tree within a tree.
 
Critique gallery? Then ... criticism:

The washout of the background is too profound to not mention. It lessens the effectiveness of what you wish to impart. THAT, along with a paucity of detail in the (underexposed?) foreground causes much distress for David Lyga. The composition is fine, but just what are you 'composing'?

Better next time to give more exposure and lessen that negative development. That will make me happy. - David Lyga
 
What a great tree, very dramatic, good spotting, good choice of filter.
Burn (not literally) the high lights on the tree a stop or so, crop the fore ground closer to the base of the trunk and crop the left side so the tree is off center and the curve of the branch accentuates the clearing beyond. Gives you somewhere for the eye to wander to.....anyway its just my opinion.
 
Wow, what a shot, the tree standoff.
 

Media information

Category
Critique Gallery
Added by
Jos Segers
Date added
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Comment count
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Image metadata

Device
samsung GT-I9515
Aperture
ƒ/2.2
Focal length
4.2 mm
Exposure time
1/17 second(s)
ISO
160
Filename
Olijfboom.jpg
File size
2.5 MB
Date taken
Thu, 07 September 2017 11:46 AM
Dimensions
2169px x 2729px

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