On the bus

I think I'd like it more if you cropped out the bottom, at the point right below the highlight on the seat frame taking out the hideous seat pattern. Then the image has a far more stark black and white and interesting and mysterious feel to it. The focal point is her head and I feel the patterned seat back takes the image from being great to being mundane and homey. Do that and I think you have a winner. The seat cushion just gives away the ending.