Whaddaya wanna do next?

Whaddaya wanna do next?

On a photo walk about
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Downtown
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Bessa R2 CV 35 f2.5
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nr
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Arista 100, Arista Premium
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neg scan
I'd be very tempted to crop it vertically taking out the camera bag or whatever that is, eliminating the right side window and I think you have a stronger picture. That makes the photographer, the interloper, more of a focal point. It also eliminates the junk on the ceiling.
 
And I would slightly increase the contrast too.
 
blansky said:
I'd be very tempted to crop it vertically taking out the camera bag or whatever that is, eliminating the right side window and I think you have a stronger picture. That makes the photographer, the interloper, more of a focal point. It also eliminates the junk on the ceiling.
But the photographer decided to frame it this way and by cropping you are destroying the integrity of the shot.
 

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2015-06-03-0006_copy_web_jet_and_swift1.jpg
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