jane 2005
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jane 2005

Available light (entranceway) on dark night. I do wish her face wasn't so over-exposed - I've heavily burned it for this print - but the lighting was difficult.
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Location
Nikon F, 85mm f1.4
Equipment Used
1/60 f1.4
Exposure
HP5+ 1600, D76 stock 14 min
Film & Developer
Ilford MG-IV
Paper & Developer
2
Your Lili Marlene? or a model? If the second, pose her and try again. The dramatic lighting is eye catching.
 
arigram
The set up and the lighting really feels like a theater's stage and the photograph has a lot of the drama of ...a drama
 
Alas, not posed, but a grab shot. No way to try it again. But this is one of a sequence (thank heaven for motor drives) so I will try printing some of the others.
 
You have a very good eye! To improve the composition, I would remove the extra black space on the right so the lady wouldn't be so bang in the centre.
 

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