Tree Lined Path
CLAPhoto

Tree Lined Path

Shot with a Pentax 645 with a Ziess 80mm f/2.8 Biometar. Film is Tri-X 400 rated at 100 and developed in Diafine.
Location
Downers Grove, IL
Equipment Used
Pentax 645, Carl Ziess 80mm F/2.8 Biometar
Exposure
F/16 at 1/250
Film & Developer
Tri-X 400 at iso 1000 and developedin Diafine
Lens Filter
B&W Red#25
I like this image, but it feels like it needs to be narrower to me. What would it look like if it was cropped on the left and right to just include the trees in the middle and the right?
 
I like the feeling of a path that the trees create, but it is too heavily weighted on the left side. Also, the center horizon line seems a bit distracting. I think that this would be more striking if the emphasis were placed on the ground by moving the horizon line up a bit, but your opinions may vary.

- Randy
 

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Filename
treelinedpathjpg.jpg
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