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pstake
Lovely composition. I love the use of negative space in the foreground. My only criticism is the grain. I like it for some images for its ability to give a more abstract feel, which it does very well with this image, but I think I would like to see this with sharp detail and no grain. This is entirely preference and if I saw this in a gallery, I would undoubtedly gaze a good while. EDIT: Like I am now!
 
nipia
pstake said:
Lovely composition. I love the use of negative space in the foreground. My only criticism is the grain. I like it for some images for its ability to give a more abstract feel, which it does very well with this image, but I think I would like to see this with sharp detail and no grain. This is entirely preference and if I saw this in a gallery, I would undoubtedly gaze a good while. EDIT: Like I am now!
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I thought about it, but my combination at this time (tri-x 35mm+rodinal) could not give any better effect. I'm not sure now that something can be fixed but it is certain that I will try.Thanks.
 
tony lockerbie
Yes, agree with pstake here, this grain really works with industrial landscapes etc, but you do have a great composition and nice dramatic light.
 
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tony lockerbie said:
Yes, agree with pstake here, this grain really works with industrial landscapes etc, but you do have a great composition and nice dramatic light.
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As I said, I think you're right, but I won't give up grain in future,because it is part of my style or maybe....Thanks
 
Grain is good... it is your style. Keep it up! Some will like it some won't, I like it.
 
Thomas Bertilsson
I love your style, nipia. I'm with Mr. Bender above. Grain is good. Keep doing your thing. It's a terrific landscape photograph with a strong emotional draw.
 
nipia
Criticisms and your opinions are always welcome.I understand that we think differently, that's the catch.Thanks to all.
 

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