Aspirations
Dan Henderson

Aspirations

This little church sits at the crest of a mountain road I travel frequently. The first time I saw it my eye was drawn to the row of arbor vitae trees that seemed to be emulating the steeple; reaching for the heavens. I wanted to emphasize the connection that I saw between the trees and steeple, and infrared film seemed the appropriate means.

This is only the second successful photograph that I have made using infrared film, so I am interested in hearing from experienced infrared users how my technique could be improved, and any comments on the picture in general.

Thanks in advance for looking.
Location
Foster's Knob, Virginia
Equipment Used
Linhof
Film & Developer
Efke IR in Obsidian Aqua
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGWT in LPD 1:5
Lens Filter
IR72
Very nice, I like the concept of the repeating spires. As I see it here on my monitor I might like just a little more hint of detail in the trees toward the lower left, but I can easily imagine the print may look better on that score. A scanner plus a monitor between my eyes and someone's print seldom results in an optimum visual connection! I have found printing my IR negatives to be more frustration than I expected on my last few attempts, largely due to very high brightness ratios. Maybe I need to rethink my handling of the film exposure/development end. (And I have a print session in the queue as I e-speak.) DaveT
 
Hi Dan I think this works very well and you were right to use IR to take the shot. While I can see that you managed to retain detail in the shadows, I might be inclined to print for an extra half stop or so just to boost the contrast range. When reading your concept in taking the photo what occurred to me was, why you didn't move more to your left so as to isolate the side of the church and its trees which would then be echoed by the steeple against the black sky.But of course this is how I might approach the photo and thank goodness we are all different when it comes to photography.
 

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