Tina

Maybe a little less space at the sides? Or burn in the points of her shoulders? The eyes are really strong and don't need any competition.

I like it both like this or cropped dead square. Cropped brings forth the confidence in her eyes more, in my opinion.

If it's a shot of her boobs, keep them in. If it's a shot of a person, crop it and focus more attention on her eyes which are striking. For what my opinion's worth (hint: whatever you paid for it 8^) I'd crop it square to make it more a head and shoulders. I think she'd be an interesting body and form study, but the hippie dreadlocks and piercing are really jarring, for that. Also striking for me is the softness of the image, which must be the interesting lens you used -- it must look pretty great in person as a print, I'd imagine.

Colin: you're right I suppose... I think I made the mistake I often tell my students not to do...With beautiful eyes and beautiful breasts in the same image, confusion can occur... what to look at?My problem is, that I should have taken this with clothes. As I really don't like to crop her hair..My solution - and I am going to try: to make an "imperfect" bromoil, where I focus more on the eyes and hair, than the rest..Time will tell, whether it will work.Thank you for your opinion - it is appreciated!