A good book
ignatiu5

A good book

Location
Savannah, GA
Equipment Used
Canon Elan 7E, EF 28-135/3.5-4.5 IS, 420EX Speedlite bounced
Exposure
EI 320
Film & Developer
Tri-X, Ilford DDX 1+4
Paper & Developer
film scan for now
Lens Filter
yellow
I did not see a book, but a pretty nude woman;--)))
On the left side could be a bit more space in my opinion otherwise perfect!

Cheers, Armin
 
She's extremely beautiful! It's a gorgeous composition. The only thing that bugs me is the hand on the left side. Either include the whole thing or leave it out. (I'm nitpicking). Love looking at this, it's so peaceful.
 
Many thanks for the comments and criticisms, it is very much appreciated. I actually purposefully shot this frame with just a touch of her right hand as a kind of anchor; there isn't any more negative on that side. I've been making an effort to (over) fill the frame more than I usually do; maybe it doesn't work here, and unfortunately cropping it out completely loses the curve of her shoulder. Luckily enough I do have other negatives with all of that right hand. I'll make test prints of both negatives and see which I like better.
 

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