Breathing (the Absence)

I like the idea of this but to see it, it looks like she might be happy that her head is in a plastic bag - unless that is what you were going for, I would say that the tension and fear that an event like this would inspire did not make it through to the film. I've enjoyed looking at all your photos, thanks!

Please don't try this at home!

Message of the picture isn't clear...what do you want to say? The pointy bag looks rather comical, her expression isn't readable.

Technically the image is very nice. I agree with Nancy's comment. I find this "type" of image made a lot with young artistic explorations.
It doesn't create a feeling of urgency or disgust with me... It has too much of the feeling of playful exploration or attempted shock value.