Desecrated

It's desecrated. You switched the e and a. I've read that HP5+ and Rodinal don't really produce nice results, but this seems OK.

I actually thought it was a deliberate mis-spelling, since a lot of memorials are made of 'artificial stone' (concrete).

The contrast has made some extra work, but you should be able to control it. I do think the left side needs either more space or cropping to remove the gap, but I like the mood anyway.

I've been happy with the results of HP5 and Rodinal. Straight processed, though...no pushing or pulling. Take it for what its worth...I've only done about a half dozen rolls in the stuff...and I'm happy if there are discernable images on the roll when it comes out of the tank!