Colorado Waterfall
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Falls at Tremen Glen
He's watching
Colorado Waterfall
Television
Entering the bubble
unity in dance

Colorado Waterfall

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Bullet proof negative. Scan has more contrast than original print. No manipulating at all
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Location
Above Silverton CO
Equipment Used
Kodak 2d 5x7 210 lens
Film & Developer
Pyrocat HD 2:2:100
Paper & Developer
Centenial POP
Lens Filter
none
Marc Leest
Nice details. The trees/shrubs look unnatural. I'd suggest a littlemore contrast/somewhat darker print (dunno know if that with POP is possible)
 
Compositionally it's natural... I'd say the top waterfall just sneaking in is a distraction... I would crop the top to eliminate that...

I don't know what else was in the area, but I question if panning to the right a bit could have been done... If so, that may have strengthened the image. Seems like the rocks on the left could have still had a presence to the image but the waterfall (center of interest) could have been more fully shown especially towards the bottom.

I have never used POP so I don't feel I should comment on manipulations... Can you easily change contrast/burn& dodge?

joe :smile:
 

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