Clouds, Triptych

Tried for this idea 5-6 times over the years and never quite got what I wanted. Underexposed heavily to get blackness in the blue parts of the sky (2 red filters), then overdeveloped heavily to get highlights where I envisioned them. I'd love to hear what you think.
Location
GA
Equipment Used
Mamitya C330, 80mm f/2.8
Exposure
3 different ones...
Film & Developer
Fp4 in pyrocat- HD 1:1:100, semi-stand for 24 minutes
Lens Filter
red 25 and light red
Very dramatic. Reminds me of a style of painting that I can't put my finger on... I'd say you hit it.
 
I like the idea that you have here. I wonder if your highlights are blown in the actual images...they appear that way on my monitor, but it could be just the scan.
 
This grouping must look magnificent on a wall. I am curious - what size are your display prints? I think 16" x 16" would be a good size.

gma
 
These are fantastic! I think they would be good as small or large prints.

I do have to question your use of the two red filters. I would think that because the Dark Red filter blocks the same frequencies (plus a little more) as the Light Red blocks, the Light Red filter has the effect of a neutral density filter.
 
I love the creativity in the exposure, with the 2 red filters and underexposing and then over developing. as far a the images these work very well for me. the balance is very good and the shapes work well together. Sone of the highlights or shadows over paoer the pictures.


again very well done.

mike andersen
 
Thanks for the comments. At the time being, all I have is contact prints because I'm still looking for my first enlarger. I had never tried 2 red filters before, and didn't take any with just one when I shot these, so I have no idea what effect there was adding the second filter. The scan is a little to high key, but it gets the point across. I'd love to get these to 10x10" I think for the final print, (when I get an enlarger that is). Again, thanks for the kind words =)
 
rootberry, there is one problem. A filter darkens the sky. A dark cloud is also dark, like the sky. So there is the lack of contrast.

To get the effect, you maybe need more white clouds.

When enlarging, I would develop just normal. You can adjust the sky and the clouds via contrast control and development time.

I like how you put together these 3 cloud-pics. Very nice done, well edited.
 

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