To answer your question, I think your colour balance is really impressive. If you have people in a picture and you cannot quite get a truly accurate balance, then as are you going to have a colour cast, make it a warm colour cast. The picture itself is quite good, I would though, think about cropping out that cyan sign at the top, looks quite nice in a landscape format to boot. Mick.
Thanks Mick. If I cropped out that sign, would I be in trouble with just the big black area? Or would I then want to pull it in tighter around the center figure?Landscape layout does look good though. Maybe I could crop away the left also to maintain same aspect ratio for framing?